In my paper I mostly talked about my earliest memories as I was starting to read and write and I talked about how those memories shaped me as a reader and writer. I would like my peer reviewer to look out for me getting off track, and also me staying on track with the prompt.
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While reading your story it kept me very entertained and kept me focused. I enjoyed the layout of your story. One thing I think is adding your literacy sponsors before telling the story so we understand more of why you are sharing that certain story.
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I feel you stay on topic, if I was you and I wanted to add more to make the story longer I would give an example of a story you wrote for your grandma. That would make your story more entertaining and help make it longer.
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I really enjoyed reading your paper, you have a great sense of humor. I could sense the “terror” from those AR books. I was the same way in school, I was never big on homework or assigned readings.
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The experience of being locked in the basement to get you to read is honestly hilarious, I am glad that helped you begin knocking out those dredged readings.
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I really enjoyed your paper. Quite funny actually
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The content you use during your writing are all excellent, the examples describe the cause and effect well.
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Like yourself, my Grandmother also made me write her stories, I was able to identify with that story which also relates to a portion of my own literacy! Great work on the assignment!
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You had great content and examples
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Sentences flowed nicely
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