In my project I started out but looking back at what I thought reading, writing, research, good writing, and writers were before I read the chapter. I also asked my friends and my dad what they thought they were and we all had pretty similar thoughts about them. I had trouble getting started and through out the paper I started to run out of things to talk about so i’m kind of saying the same thing more than once. I don’t have direct quotes from friends but I can ask again and put it in. I also struggled with putting everything in the prompt in my paper.
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I really like your idea and your example of what a threshold concept is but I think you should add the exact definition of what the threshold concept is for someone who’s never heard of it.
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I really like your idea and your example of what a threshold concept is but I think you should add the exact definition of what the threshold concept is for someone who’s never heard of it.
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I really like your idea and example of what a threshold concept is but I think you should add the definition of a threshold concept for people who might have no idea what a threshold concept is.
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I really like your idea and your example of what a threshold concept is but I think you should add the exact definition of what a threshold concept is for someone who may not be sure of what it is
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I love your idea as a whole and where you are going with your paper. just add more supporting details
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keep going with your ideas 🙂 make sure your paper meets the length requirement.
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I think you are headed in a great direction ! just try to fulfill all the requirements and make sure you have plenty of detail and also try some strategies to get the readers attention. ex- asking questions or adding in a story
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your second paragraph catches my attention when you talk about how how writing Is impossible to perfect. I think it would be great if you gave examples of why thats impossible to do
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I really like your idea and example of a threshold concept but I think you should add some definition to give people who may not be sure of what exactly a threshold concept it
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your paper is headed in a great direction ! I know you said you were running out of ideas maybe add some personal story’s or examples of writing or the threshold concepts to expand your idea
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I really like the comparison when you said “ as a kid you think money grows on trees “ for a threshold concept
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in paragraph 2 I like how you talked about what you thought a writer needed to have ! Maybe to expand a little you could add examples for the book on what they think a good writer does or is
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